Hi blogger I have did a peace of writing on pobble 365,hope u enjoy it.
One day there was a man that was called Peter,he had the best job in the world.
He would go everywhere he saw the moon, the galaxy and the bright shiny star glowing in the sky.ever cool places that he goes to he would always take his camera with him.Peter liked every single place that he went to,wherever he went he would always capture a landscape.
He went to this glow place and it was so cool it looked like the burning sun was starting to rise. When Peter was taking a photo all the stars gathered around the sun like a circle.
Peter said ‘’I love this place more than the rest of the places’’ Peter took photos because he liked this place. He took more than 3 photos.The stars that were bunching up and making a circle looked like they were making the galaxies black whole.
Peter liked going to take photos of cool places,Peter has taken photos of hips of cool stuff like the woods,car store,space ships,and hips of other places.
As he stood alone on the frozen surface of the lake, wrapped up well against the bitterly cold wind.Peter glimpsed something extraordinary through his telescope.
Peter glimpsed something extraordinary through his telescope.
Kia ora Reiko,
ReplyDeleteI really like your pobble story its very interesting
I think you did a good job writing. Maybe next time
make sure your writing doesn"t go all over the page.
Hi reiko its emrico,
ReplyDeletei like your witreting and the words relly dicreib the story or pobble theres nothing els but make srue your wirteing is not all over the place but the rest are relly good like the words,discribing,full stops,comas and the pargrhafs,and thanks for sharing this to us.